Sorting (Term Nine)

[backtrack]

First Name:

Kaylee.

Last Name:

Rayne.

Age:

15.

Appearance:

She's only 5'11" and weighs 95 pounds.

History:

Kaylee was born, a fraternal twin, on October 7th. She's the older twin, being born only a few minutes before her brother Jherrick. Their parents, Michael and Katie Rayne were very caring and very good parents, thinking mostly of their children... their little miracles.

For a good amount of the beginning of their lives they lived in Canada, in a little home just a good size for the four of them. But then thing took a turn for the worst, a wizard named Scorpius Rouge was hunting their family. The reasons why they were being hunted were never told to the twins. Everytime they would ask their father why he would say "When we move, everything will be better." So when Kaylee and Jherrick were five they moved from their humble home in Canada to an old home in Paris. For a while the Rayne family wanted to feel safe, at ease, like they didn't need to run anymore... and Paris gave them that.

Now, their father works as a dragon catcher. He makes good money, so their mother doesn't need to work. She stays at home, tending to the house and garden, sometimes going shopping or having tea with other ladies in the neighbourhood. Their father is almsot always out travelling, but he brings all of them back souveniers and little trinkets from the places he visits.The Rayne children are currently attending Beauxbaton's learning more about their magical heritage.

Personality:

Quite like her brother, Kaylee is a complex one. Shes not very wierd, but sometimes a tad bit odd. She loves hanging out with her friends, and even her brother who she shares many of her friends with. She's very friendly, kind, caring and polite. It takes a lot to make her loose her temper, but when she does, you definately do not want to be in her way. She finds herself blushing and giggling a lot... which, to some girls, may be quite annoying. Like many other girls, she loves boys, makeup, hair and clothing. She enjoys keeping her appearance perfect. Which sometimes creates a problem, because it causes her to not eat sometimes. But she already rarely finds herself hungry. Kaylee is a dreamer, yet very down to earth. She knows whats right from whats wrong, but sometimes ignores it. She's very easy to relate to, and confess to. Shes the girl that most of her friends go to when they have problems, secrets or just need to talk or vent. She knows how to keep secrets and give decent advice. She loves reading and writing more than anything. She is almost always carrying a journal and/or book with her. Kaylee is known to be quite the flirt, yet she does it unknowningly at times. Shes not really into relationships, but enjoys going on dates.

Sample RP:

"What do I need.. what do I need..." Kaylee mumbled to herself. She slowly paced her room, trying to remember everything she needed to go back to school. She threw some books and quills into her suitcase and ploped down on her bed. She crossed her legs and sat there staring around her room. She was gonna miss being at home, seeing her parents everyday, seeing her puppy, hanging out with her few muggle friends. Soon she would be back at school, telling her muggle friends shes at a boarding school far away. She would be away from her parents, her puppy, and her home. At least I'll be with my brother and his cat Salem.. I would also finally see some of my school mates I havent been able to see over the summer break, she thought, smiling weakly to herself. Her puppy, Valentine, came running into her room and jumped on the bed onto Kaylee's lap.

"I'm gonna miss you," she said to her puppy, cradling Valentine in her arms, snuggling into her furry head. She kissed her puppy gently on her nose and the dog started licking her face. Kaylee giggled and smiled, studying her dog. Valentine looked like a really furry baby seal. She was tiny and covered in white fur. Kaylee loves her dog with all her life, unfortunately Beauxbaton doesnt allow dogs as one of the pets. She placed Valentine on her bed and stood up. She placed a few more items inside her suitcase while Valentine just sat on the bed watching her with curiousity.

"THERE!" Kaylee grinned widely as she did up the latches of her last suitcase. She placed it beside her vanity alongside her other suitcase, before looking at herself in the mirror and pulling her long black hair into a messy bun. She headed to the washroom to get ready for bed. Valentine tagged along and stared up at Kaylee, she barely left Kaylee's side. Kaylee got ready for bed quickly and scurried back to her room. Once back in her comforting room she layed upon her queen sized bed and stared at the ceiling, Valentine lying beside her, watching her cautiously. Kaylee couldn't stop thinking about how she was going to miss her bed, her room, her parents, her puppy and if things would be the same at school as it was last year.

Must be Rouerie

[bellz]

First Name:Kaleb
Last Name: Wright
Age: Seventeen
Appearance:
History:
Kaleb William Wright VI was born on April 2 along with his older twin sister, Micha Shane and to the parents Kaleb and Michelle Wright. Growing up Kaleb and Micha were poster board children. The two of them were always being dressed almost alike and taken pictures. The two even did a little commercial together for the muggle's Huggies. After his parents were down with the drown the twins in fame they had another child, Anthony David, or as Kaleb called him-AD.

After Kaleb and his sister both started school, it seemed like they went their separate ways instead of being buddy buddy. Through out the years of schooling his sister was the popular emo girly type and him the individual. Finally when his sister and he turned eleven he got his letter to go to Beauxbatons Academy, but his sister didn't since she was born a squib. Micha and he got into a fight over it all. She thought it was unfair that he was leaving her alone like she did when they went to muggle school.

So Kaleb left his family and went to Beauxbatons. At first things were awkward for him. He didn't have the skills in making friends but that soon changed after he met one. Just a few months after he started school he kind of missed his sister and his younger brother, but he knew not to cry about it since his brother would soon be going to Beauxbatons with him.

After Kaleb turned fifteen, something tragic struck his family, his sister died. This left him heartbroken. She was his other half, the one who knew his deepest darkest secrets and now she was gone. Quickly he became more depressed and sad. He pierced his lower lip and died his beautiful brown hair black to moron her death. Now being seventeen he had started to get over her death and is not so depressed. He still has his moments but doesn't let people see him break down usually.
Personality: Kaleb is a very outgoing guy. He usually looks on the brighter things of life when he can. He is in love with music but it isn't his whole life he likes other things like taking pictures. His absolute favorite thing in the word is taking pictures. Sometimes being taken, but that is rare. Sometimes Kaleb likes to be alone and just clear his thoughts and his mind. Also when it comes to being labeled he just plan hates it. He just doesn't get why people make a big deal out of it.

His favorite type of weather would have to be the rain without lightning and thunder, but yet his favorite season is the lovely spring. He isn't afraid to show his true feelings or say what is on his mind. He doesn't eat meat; he will eat eggs though. You can easily tell when Kaleb is nervous because he will he most likely be playing with his lip ring.

He loves to have any type of fun, let be joking around, walking, or playing games he loves it. Sometimes he likes to joke with people, but nothing to hurt their feelings. He hates that. He also hates receiving sympathy from anyone, doesn't know why just does.
Sample RP:
Audrey sighed as she was scrolling down her contact list on her black sidekick id. Yet again for another straight day, no one was on. Not even her sister, Penelope and she use to be on all the time. Since she transferred schools it seemed like no one wanted anything to do with her, not even her own flesh and blood. Thinking they all must be busy still with all the test and homework they lay on you at her old school, she waved it away and would check later to see if anyone was on. Audrey Mae looked down and bit her lower lip. Growing up in the smaller part of New York, she thought of this place as big, but she loved it. Everything seemed to be alive. Looking back up she shoved her hands deep into the pockets of her jeans as she headed to wards the park.

Since arriving here Audrey Mae had been at the park a lot. It was so peaceful and quiet, something she did not get at her old school or home. As she walked on, she took out her headphones and let them lay against her neck. The song that came one, wasn't her favorite and it brought up thoughts about her three step brothers, or what she called them, the triplets from hell. They were that bad and the same age as her so more annoying. She never understood why her mother married Charles, he seemed so stuck up like the over wealthy that could at least give some of the money away to those that needed it. That's why she tries to hide the fact that she has money and is rich.

Sitting down on a wooden bench, Audrey didn't want to think of something like that either. Today was suppose to be a good day. One were she might actually make a friend. Looking around her surrounding, she spotted a boy, that seemed to be just a few years older. Being the outgoing person Audrey was she opened her mouth and said, "Hello." She didn't care if they thought she was weird for speaking out loud to a stranger, it was how she was.

Must be Cossu

[tia]

First Name:Tia
Last Name:Stefan
Age:16
Appearance:

Tia has a skinny little figure, and weighs about 50 kg. She has tanned skin, and crystal blue eyes, but wears contacts so the color often differs. She has rosy cheeks, straight white teeth, and blemish free skin. Tia has her belly button pierced, a Monroe piercing, and her ears done twice on each side. She is a natural blond, but is always changing the color of her hair. Shes a little short for her age, but she doesn't mind, she loves her size, and she loves the way she looks.

History:Tia was born In a Little town in England. She lived there with her 2 older brothers, and 2 older sisters, her mother and stepfather. Her father died before she was born. Tia was the youngest of 5, which meant she was always the one to get the things that her sisters had grown out of. From clothes to make-up, Tia got it all while her sisters got everything new. But it didn't bother her, she lived a happy life. When she turned 6, her parents decided that England was not for them anymore, and that moving to America would be there next adventure. They moved beside the beach, and lived in a large house. America opened many doors, including her stepfather getting a new well paying job. Luckily for her This meant no more hand-me-downs. As time went by, Tia and her siblings became more and more spoiled. She had began to learn how to surf, she went to the mall after school every day, and bought whatever she wanted...Her life was great.

In the summer of 2003, When Tia was 10, she was informed that her oldest sister, Elise, had died in a tragic accident, yet there were no wounds on her body. Tia was confused, and her parents thought it time to tell her that she was a witch. They gave her the decision to stay at her American school, or attend a magical one. Tia was scared, and chose to ignore that fact that she had any magical powers what-so-ever.

When she turned 15, Tia's mother was hospitalized, she had developed cancer, and was not going to survive. 6 months later, she died, leaving her children in the care of her step farther. This shattered Tia as her mother was one of the only people she looked up to in the world. On her 16th birthday, She decided to fulfill her mothers dying wish, that she attended Beauxbatons school of Magic, and set off on her journey.
Personality:Tia is a happy and energetic teenager. She loves to party, drink, have fun, break rules...pretty much anything after dark. Shes a nice enough girl, but can be a bit of b*tch when she wants to be, especially to those who get on her nerves. Tia makes friends easily, and is a bit of a flirt. She loves boys, and gets along with guys and girls the same. She hates school, and will do almost anything to get out of it, but knows that if she leaves shell be breaking the promise she made to her mum. Tia loves hair, make-up and clothes. The outdoors to her is the place to be, and she has a passion for drawing. She is very sensitive, but doesn't often show her unhappiness, but keeps it locked up inside.
Sample RP:...and she leaned in, her eyes closed. Her dream was about to come true, she was about to kiss Elliot. She exhaled and then. -BRING- Tia fell out of bed. She looked at the clock...6:30 am. a Thursday morning. "why not 5 minutes later aye" she groaned as she stood up and walked to her dresser. She had just woken up from the best dream...ever...shame it was a dream. She looked in the mirror, her Blond hair still sat perfectly in place, even though she had slept on it all night. A voice sounded from downstairs, it was her stepfather "TIA! quick or your breakfast will get cold" he yelled. "Yeah be there in a sec Kay dad!?" She yelled back in a rough English accent.

She quickly threw on a pair of skinnies, a Band-tee and some boots, wrapped a scarf around her neck , put in some hoop earing's, and walked downstairs. As she entered the kitchen, Her dad was just walking out the door. "bye, have a good day" she smiled and blew him a kiss. "you to sweet heart" he said as he exited the house. Tia sat down at the table, there was a warm plate of pancakes positioned in front of her. She looked outside, it was a beautiful sunny day, the blue sky was hardly covered, except by a few little white clouds. Tia finished her breakfast, then walked to the front door, grabbed her handbag, and set off to school.

You need to seriously spell check this application. Also your display name should match the name in your application.
ok i fixed it up (:
Must be Rouerie

[haley`marie albright]

First Name: Haley
Last Name: Albright
Age: 15
Appearance:

History:
Haley was born to Richard and Evelyn Albright on October 13th in Budapest Romania. They were a very private family, and Haley was raised in solitude for the majority of her childhood. She spent her days being tutored and playing in her family's Victorian manor. It was a rainy day in Budapest when Haley first ventured outside of the grounds of her family's manor.

One of the gate keepers had accidentally left the gates open and she ran through before anyone noticed. It took mere minutes for her to come upon a little boy about her age. He asked her if she wanted to play, and the following acts are too gruesome for even Haley to remember. This was the day she first discovered her thirst for human blood.

The incident caused her family to flee Romania for the buzzing city of Paris. These next few years just proved for more solitude and hiding for Haley. That is, until she received her acceptance letter from Beauxbatons. The amount of joy she felt has no words to properly describe it. Of course, the joy was mixed with an overwhelming fear that her thirst would once again overcome her.

Now, four years later, Haley has yet to give in to her thirst. Of course, she doesn't have many friends, but she lives her life to the best of her abilities, mostly trying to stay out of people's way. But in the odd confrontation, she has an uncanny ability to always win, giving her menacing temper and her ability to intimidate.

Personality:
Haley is a very temperamental teenager. Given her vampiric tendencies, she finds it hard to control her thirst. Having a thirst that is unsatisfied really only makes her temper more easily blown.

Not a very fond person of the sun, Haley hates bright colors as well. She is always seen wearing black with either: green, red, orange, or purple. Over accessorizing is a must when it comes to this teen.

Sample RP:
Haley ran through the halls of Beauxbatons, trying desperately not to be late again. Her Potions professor had already warned her that if she was late one more time she'd have detention during the Halloween Ball. She was desperately hoping that Kaleb would ask her to go with him, so Haley had been trying to make it on time to all of her classes.

Out of breath, she finally reached the Potions door. Opening it, she stepped inside and was rewarded with a glaring professor. Ms. Albright, how nice of you to join us. Detention. Haley felt like she wanted to cry, and if it weren't for her upbringing, she would have. Glaring at her professor, she took a seat at the only space left and cursed herself. Now she'd never get to go out with Kaleb. He'd wind up going with another girl and she'd be forgotten.

Must be Sournois

[daria]

&&_first_name:

Daria

&&_last_name:

Page

&&_age:

Sixteen Candles

&&_appearance:



&&_history:

Daria was born in Paris on a cold and windy day in early January. Her parents, Robert and Glenda, were happy to have finally had a child after trying for so many years. Then to their surprise they had 3 more kids back to back, only a year apart, after Daria. They were ecstatic to have been blessed with so many children. Daria loved her brothers and sisters, Gerold, Harold and Sara. They all had their sibling spats, but deep down loved one another. They lived a happy quaint life. Both Daria's parents are Pure-Bloods. Her mother always told her and her siblings they should be proud to be part of a "dying breed" as she puts it. But her father never really had much to say on the matter. Blood lines just don't bother Daria, only because she didn't want to spend her time thinking about who was and wasn't Pure, most people lied about it nowadays anyways. Daria loves being at Beauxbatons, her parents have to practically drag her home over summer. Her siblings eat breakfast together a couple times a week, but don't really hangout together at school(siblings to come later maybe). All in all she lives a comfortable, and to some, boring life. But Daria would love to change that and shake things up a bit.

&&_personality:

To most people Daria seems quiet and reserved. But that isn't the case really. She just likes to think and daydream about how life could be. She's really going to bring out her true personality this year. She is tired of being the wallflower and wants to shine and be noticed. Her true friends will tell you thats how she is anyways, once she gets to know someone. She can have fun and laugh and be crazy like the rest of them. Yes, this is her year!

&&_sample_rp:

Daria couldn't wait for the new year. She had her trunk packed already and it was still a few days before they left. She sat on her bed and daydreamed. About what it would be like this year. Her and her friends had decided this was their year. The year they would run the school. Daria wasn't really interested in all that, but she did want to be noticed and have fun and not be known as the boring girl anymore. She wasn't boring! She was just reserved around certain people, but not this year.

"DARIA!" her little sister Sara yelled. Sara was only 13 and annoyed Daria to no end. "DARIAAAAAAAA!" came the shout again. Daria was just going to ignore her until she hauled her butt in here and talked at a normal level. She could hear her sister sigh all the way from her room. Sara walked in, of course without knocking, and said, "Daria, didn't you hear me yelling?" Daria looked up, a confused look on her face, "No Sara dear I didn't hear you. But now that you're in here what do you want?" she asked in a viciously calm voice. Sara rolled her eyes and said, "I need some new things from town, will you pleaseeeee take me?" Daria wanted to smack her, she was so annoying. Daria may have only been sixteen, but she felt much more than three years older than Sara. But she needs some new things for school as well, so she sighed and gave in. "Okay, okay lets go, but we're not going to be there for too long, I have other things to do today than take you shopping for hours on end." she finished as she grabbed her coat and the two girls headed down the stairs and out the front door.

Must be Sournois

[ericlyman]

First Name: Eric

Last Name: Lyman

Age: 17

Appearance:


History:
Eric Lyman was born in Vienna, Austria, December 10th of 1990. His mother, Helena, was a muggle, married to his father, Alexander, who was a wizard. His parents, in their 20's, met on a bar in Vienna, and their encounter developed into an instant chemistry between them. They married 1 month later. One year later, the first child was born - John. Five years after, Sophie was born and finally, three years later, Eric, came into the world.
John went to Hogwarts, where he studied for 7 years. His sister, Sophie went to Durmstrang, where she is studying, in her second year. John continued his studies after school, and became an Auror. Sophie, is a very wild student, but even so, she is called the most bright witch of her year.

Three years ago, their parents died. They went to France in vacations and according to the Daily Prophet, they were killed by a Giant, living in the mountains, where they went to ski. Their bodies were never found. Eric never accepted their deaths. It was completely out of his control, but he felt guilty for that. He knew, all of them knew, there were giants around those mountains, but even so, his father insisted in going and told them everything would be alright. Surely it didn't went well, not like he said.

Some months ago, Eric received a letter. It was an invitation to study in Beauxbatons. The third child was going to study in other different school. Each siblings studied in different places, now Eric was going to France. Of course he accepted. Now he's in Beauxbatons, waiting to be sorted.

Personality:
Although he is very young, Eric is a very mature boy. Of course he has his wild side, always very funny and in a good mood. He loves to help people, and his dream is to become a Herbology teacher. He's very simple, friendly, generous, kind and helpful.

John, his older brother, was known as the nerd one. He loved books, to study and he was always reading. His sister, Sophie, is the wildest of the three. She loves to party, make friends, flirt and joke with everyone's situations. Eric, in other hand, is the artist. He loves to paint landscapes, take pictures from every human situations, and make animal sculptures. Beyond that, he loves to hangout with his very few friends, read science-fiction and suspense books and watch nature documentaries on TV.

Sample RP:
Eric sat down on a table in the Hall. The room was amazingly decorated with beautiful sculptures, some fairies, long tables full with delicious food, some flowery ornaments and a bright light, which illuminated everything around them. Everyone seemed really happy and having fun. Everyone was laughing and talking and joking. It seemed only Eric was feeling alone and quite nervous and maybe scared. None of his brothers studied there, and he didn't know this school. Beyond that, his parents were dead and he didn't have the usual comfort words, parents give to their children. Only John had mom and dad along with him.

The loss of his parents was a tough stroke, and the vision of his father smiling was even more hurtful. Eric looked to a couple of students on his side. They were all smiling to each others and they seemed really interested in the newbies. Then, the headmistress, Madam Maxime, surely a giant because of her height, got up and started talking. The word "Giant" was actually a terrible way of remembering what happened to his parents. This word made him imagine the way his parents died.

Eric twisted his head, trying to think about other things and looked to the professor. She really was tall, but not so big as Giants. And, she was surely loved daughter, and the giant was surely good to the wizard/witch it married. She was talking about the sorting cloak and how the newbies would get sorted into the houses. Then, she spoke about the houses - Rouerie, Cossu and Sournois. According to the history, it seemed Cossu was surely the best choice for him. Then, the sorting cloak started singing. Eric opened is mouth with surprise. He heard of a talking hat in Hogwarts, and a talking ghost in Durmstrang, but he's never heard of a talking cloak.

Some minutes later, after the song, Madam Maxime started calling their names. A girl named Amanda walked into Madam Maxime's direction and then the headmistress put up the cloak in the girl's shoulders. Some seconds later, the cloak said in a loud tone the house of that girl - Sournois. Half an hour later, about 30 newbies were already sorted. Finally, Eric heard his name... feeling nervous and excited, he walked slowly to the cloak. Madam Maxime put the cloak on Eric...

Must be Cossu

[penelope inés páez]

First Name:
William

Last Name:
Mustang

Age:
18

Appearance:


History:
Will grew up with his family back in Germany. His twin brother is Roy Mustang. They were a family of pure bloods. Things managed to happen to his siblings somehow. Supernatural things. William is the only one that didn't have anything happen to him out of his brothers and sister. William hasn't come here at the same time as Roy had. They bugged the hell out of each other, that Will went to Hogwarts instead. Eventually, he realized that all his siblings were here, so he came here as well.

((Yeah, sorry about the shortness of this. I don't want to make up a lot of Roy's history. xp))

Personality:
William is a rather simple kid. Nothing scares him. His brother is now a demon and has some other vampire siblings. Will has met his share of oddities. He is really annoying as well, or so he's told. Roy's thrown fireballs many times if he went him during term breaks. He's is quite thankful that he has a knack for running. A lot of times he feels left out being a mere pure blood rather than a demon or a vampire or whatever else is out there (He's seen a lot).

Many say that twins like Roy and Will [Identical] are completely different in personality. That may be true, but not totally with Roy and William. William can be brutally honest some times, and can be witty when time calls for it. He can be considered rude sometimes as well. Really, he just tries to make people laugh. Sometimes people take it the wrong way. Sometimes his jokes can be black, or just plain dark. He means well, but he doesn't notice how he comes off as. He isn't one to worry about his appearance. Will is just a butt head.

Sample RP:
William stood at the entrance of Beauxbatons, staring in awe at the palace. It certainly was gorgeous. It certainly looked wondered and amazing compared to the crummy old castle that was Hogwarts. He was going to miss the place, but he was going to have a great time. He was going to make sure of it. He blinked his eyes and rubbed his toque against his brown hair and huffed at himself, making a face.
He glanced behind him, actually feeling nervous. Would he fit in? Would he be welcome? Would his siblings be shocked with his appearance? Its not like he owled them telling them ahead of time that he was coming. No. He wanted to use the infamous surprise technique. He flashed a grin at himself. He wondered if anyone would confuse him for Roy. Heh. Maybe he could act like him. Have his nose in the air and snub people. Nawh. The kids here probably knew he wasn't like that. Roy wasn't that much of the arrogant fool.

He shrugged inwardly and strutted up to the door and peeked in. He looked over around the entrance hall, totally spiffed. Heck, the entrance hall was awesome. His mouth hung open as he looked around, taking in his surroundings. The ceiling, the walls, the floor. He raised an eyebrow. It was oddly empty. Where was his welcoming committee? He sighed and walked over to the sorting ceremony and waited to put on the sorting cloak.

((Heh, hem. I don't know what to do for the RP sample. x_x I'm truly sorry about the app. ;_;))

Hard to sort. You sound more like a Sournois than anything.

[este1maedhros]

First Name:Estel
Last Name: Maedhros
Age: 11
Appearance: Estel has short black hair, and bright hazel eyes. He is 5'1" skinny and small for his age.

History: Estel grew up in France with his father Lemier. His mother passed away from a mysterious illness when he was very young. His father, didn't take very good care of Estel. He wasn't mean or abusive, just neglectfully. After losing his wife he just stopped caring about anything. Estel spent most of his time cooped up in his room. His father didn't even take the time out to teach Estel so he had to learn everything him self. He taught his self to read, write, cook, among other things. Although he knew how to cook there was rarely anything for him to cook. Therefore he was very small and skinny for his age. When he found out about wizarding school he had to beg his father several times to let him go, and to take him where he needed to get his school supplies. Finally Estel was able to get away from his neglectful father and would be able to have three square meals a day.

Personality: Estel is very shy and timid. He doesn't speak unless spoken to, and if so it's very little. He's careless at times, where he doesn't care what happens to him. He is actually very friendly to those who show kindness toward him. To anyone who shows hostility to-wards him, he'll return the favor. He can be rather vengeful when the occasion calls for it. His strengths, which are limited, pertain only to the arts. He has a very creative streak, which he's used to entertain himself over the years.

Sample RP: Estel sat on the window seal looking out at the night sky. It was partially cloudy with a few stars twinkling between them. He sighed and closed his eyes as a light breeze floated in through the open window. He had just received his letter letting him know he was going to wizarding school. Estel had been looking forward to going away all day. Finally a place where he can learn without teaching his self, and have three square meals a day. He hoped that the other students would like him. He wanted so much to finally make friends his age. The thought of being able to use magic was another great aspect of everything as well. His father hadn't seemed to surprised about the news. Estel didn't know if his father was a wizard as well, and just didn't practice magic anymore. He never asked questions to his father. Estel knew that if he did, he'd not get a reply unless he pestered him persistently. After awhile it just got old. Estel got up from the window seal and crept across his room. He opened the door slowly and poked his head outside. He could hear his father's snores from down the hall. He was asleep. Estel crept out of his room and down the hallway to the back door. When he couldn't sleep at night he would tend to wonder around outside. Estel snuck out the back door and walked down the garden path to-wards the back of the yard. He hopped over the fence and entered the field behind it. The field had become a usual haunt for Estel on restless nights. There was a park there that was always empty at night. He spent a little while sitting at the park by himself. Finally he went back home and laid on his bed. Sleep overtook him shortly afterwards.

You sound like a gothic Cossu lol.

[fleurclairmont]

First Name:Fleur
Last Name: Clairmont
Age: 14
Appearance:

History:

Fleur was born in Paris to her mum Sammie Edmonds and her dad Christan Clairmont.She grew up in Dover after moving there when she was 3 years old.Her mum and dad had gone separate ways when they had moved.She had started school normally.Grown up "Normally".

Well her mum was starting to get on her nerves.As such.So she decided to run away when she was 8.Fleur slept on the streets for a year before getting a letter delivered by owl (Which she thought was strange) saying that she was to go to a boarding school.As she didn't know about magic and such, she went along with it.

Only 7 days before she went did she find out it was a magical school.She found out when she went to pick her things up from Diagon Alley.Fleur almost refused to go but went.Forced.When she found out it was back in France, she was delighted.

Personality:

Fleur is a bubbly, energetic person who always looks out for people.She has always cared for those around her no matter what the situation is.When angry, she can lose her temper very easily.But otherwise she is a lovely person to be with.Whenever someone needs a helping hand, she will be there.She i quite popular yet she has a shy side.

Sample RP:

Fleur walked up to the school in front of her.She looked up at the magnificent brickwork before her.Her suitcase, which sat next to her, was a little tattered as it was the only one she had.Her mum had made sure that she was wearing the school uniform before he left.Just in case.The wind howled gently through the hollow trees.The blazer around her shoulders flapped in the wind.

As she stepped inside the hall, footsteps could be heard behind her.Fleur turned around and smiled."This is the best day of my life,"She muttered looking around as the other students flowed past her.She walked on up towards the dorms, on the blue marble staircase.Her suitcase trailed behind her, clicking on every step.

A girl ran up to her.At first Fleur didn't recognize her.Suddenly it hit her."Anna?"She asked as the girl nodded in awe.Anna was one of the people, who she had left behind when she and her parents left for England.

You need to space after periods and use spell check. Also you need more information in your personality section and you need a longer and stronger RP sample. Also some of your history doesn't make sense. You ran away and lived on the streets, yet your mother sent you a letter. And if she knew where you were why didn't she come and get you, you were only 8 years old!

Fixed

She seems almost Mary Sue like except for the angry part. Cant you think of other flaws to make her real? Also, how could she have gotten a letter at the age of 9 when the letter comes when they are about to be 11 years old. She's also coming to Beauxbatons at the age of 14--whats happened there? There are huge gaps in your history that you aren't even thinking of.

[sirconnorstine]

First Name:James
Last Name:Howard
Age:17
Appearance:here
History:
Parents: King Howl Pendragon and Kathrine Howard
Siblings
Half brother King Henry Pendragon of the Ingary Fairies
Personal History:
James is a King of rebel faries. He was the b**tard son of the great King of the Ingary Fairies Howl Pendragon and his mother Kathrine Howard. He was the Kings first son but because he was illegitimate he could not inherit the throne. His younger half brother Henry Pendragon became king when his father died and this angered James so much he decided to rebel against his half brother.
James is a genius in the Dark arts and loves mythology.He went to durmstrang up until this summer when he wanted to transfer into Beauxbatons. He now wants to teach so he himself can learn more about them in every way possible. He also wants the students to be able to defend themselves and be able to fire with fire. He is an expert problem solver because he has had to solve big problems since the day he was born.

Personality:
James is witty and smart. He knows how to keep a constant look and not show his feelings even thought he shows them constantly. He is a romantic and loves to flirt in the old courtly way. His flaws are that he will do anything for love that may be the key to his undoing. He likes to travel and listen to music. He knows how to survive and take in all accounts and ideas because he has had to fight for his rights since he was born. He does what he has to get what he wants no matter what the cost.

James is in a period of his life where he is unsure of himself and does not know who he is or what he is to become. He knows he is destined to become great but is his greatness to be good or evil?

Likes:
James loves music, traveling, snowboarding, skate boarding, and talking to friends.
Dislikes:
He hates being told something is impossible or that he is wrong.

Sample RP:
"Oh I wish I could take you to see the world. It is more amazing than this site now. Hey! What about this break we travel to Italy together?” He wanted her to say yes so much. He wanted to be with her and show her all the things he had seen. He would be the one to show her all the romantic and lovely places that were in the world and whom very few knew about. He wanted to be her guide to the world. He looked at her face for a moment and then looked away. She was the most beautiful girl he had ever seen and she mad him want to be great and heroic. Was she a veela? She couldn’t be, she was so unsure of herself. Well it didn’t matter as long as he loved her right? She was his wish for so long and now she was right here before him and he couldn't look at her for that moment. Why?
It was about 5:00pm now and the sun was setting."Look."He said pointing to the herizon. The sky was turning scarlet in the fading sunlight.” It looks almost as lovely as your deep blue eyes.” He loved her and he knew he would ask her out but did she like him?” I think we should be getting back to the school but before we do I have to do something.” He leaned over and kissed her. It seemed like an eternity in one minute. He never wanted it to end but alas it had to. The cloud lowered to the ground and he helped he onto her horse before ridding back to the stables of the school.


Is this history better?

[hanie]

First Name: tempest
Last Name: marcello
Age: 16
Appearance: pretty girl is suffering
History: Tempest was born on october 31st into the wealthy and old pureblood family. She was born right in her family's large Paris estate. She had a very good life, her parents loved their only daughter and spoiled her rotten. Her parents were more or less always busy, but Tempest didn't mind that. When she turned 11, it was decided that she would attend her father's alumni school of Hogwarts, instead her mother's, Beauxbatons. When reaching Hogwarts she was sorted into Slytherin with her cunning mind and pureblood. Life went on, but after a hard break-up with her longtime boyfriend in her 5th year, she decided to finish out her schooling here at Beauxbatons.
Personality: Tempest is a b*tch, plain and simple. She frowns down on things that aren't perfect or like her. She is sick and twisted and actually enjoys being mean and ruining other people's lives. Tempest is very good at playing sweet and innocent, she's cunning and willing to stab any one in the back. She's in control and loving it, but she has insecurities just like anyone else especially about her weight. She's a tease and a flirt.
Sample RP: Tempest walked through the halls of Beauxbatons, her designer luggage levitating behind her. She was heading towards her new dormitory, it was a lot different here than it was at Hogwarts, different in almost a good way. First of all there was no Peeves harassing everybody, that was always, always a good thing to Tempest. Oh how she had hated that poltergeist. Still, she was going to miss her friends and maybe even her ex boyfriend a bit here. Then again, she had some family and childhood friends who went here that might be willing to help her out.

She reached her new dorm to find several other girls laying on bed and chatting. None of them spoke to her, but just gave her rude glares, that was when Tempest knew she was going ti fit in here. She let her bags fall at the foot of her bed and started taking out a few things here and there. After a few moments of silence, Tempest rudely said "What is your guys's problem?"

this is sooo bad, i'm sorry.

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lol I love that you left Hogwarts because of a bad breakup . Must be Sournois

[addiction]

First Name: Sehlah
Last Name: Chang
Age: 16
Appearance:
History: Sehlah Li Jade Chang was born on April 28th to Sabrina Deveraux-Chang and Jin Chang. Sabrina was a pure-blood witch born in Paris, France who married a muggle in her early twenties. Her parents weren't happy about it but they grew to love Jin as their own. She told him about being a witch right after they got married and he accepted it but it took him awhile. Sehlah was born 3 years into their marriage. They were so happy about it. Sehlah was a perfect blend of the pair. She had her fathers black hair and skin color and her mothers eyes. She was a great baby that grew into a beautiful young lady.her parents moved to England shortly after her birth. She was always polite at family gatherings and always nice to those she had never met. She always knew when to laugh at bad jokes and when to accept compliments gratefully.She acted like the perfect pure-blood daughter even if she was a half-blood.

When Sehlah was 10 her father was diagnosed with brain cancer. He died shortly after. She was devestated and she was torn about it. She was aways a daddy's girl and now that he was gone she felt lost. She and her mother would cry together some nights and they were always there for each other. This made the pair closer than ever and they became stronger together. Soon after though Sehlah started at Hogwarts and she was separated from her mother for the year. When she arrived back her mother had re-married and her new step dad was evil. He had two sons that were both older than her. He treated her like dirt and he would beat her when her mother wasn't around.

In her fifth year she began an obsession with her weight. She was perfectly skinny and toned because she was a very active Gymnast. She was a fantastic one at that but she felt she wasn't skinny enough. Soon she stopped eating meals and when she did eat it was in small amounts. She became really sick and it went on for a year before her mother finally noticed and made her get help. She got better but she still had to deal with her step-dad and step brothers. She decided to run after her fifth year. She moved in with her older cousin on her mothers side who lived in the country side in France. She left without a word to her family and she only talked to her best friends. They all called her Cinderella without the man.

Personality: Sehlah is a calm and relaxed girl. She hates it when people make fun of other people and she has to stick up for them. She likes to listen to people more than she likes to talk. She learned to be an excellent listener and people always come to her for advice. She's also very kind. She likes to take care of people but she also likes to keep to herself. She has a hard shell that's hard to break through. She's very untrusting and if she does trust you it's for life. She's a great friend to have and when she does make friends with you you'll be very glad because she's always there when you need her and she listens. She's also very brave. She sticks up for you when you need it and she always speaks her mind, no matter how terrible the words are.

Her temper is was legendary at home. She would always have a sort of calm anger. She would only start to speak in a low voice and her arms would cross. That was it usually. She hardly ever yelled and when she did it was only when she was very very angry.

Sample RP: Ashleigh looked around Diagon Alley. The place was filled with people and it was crowded as ever. There were people surrounding her but Ashleigh never felt so alone. She shut her eyes, knowing she was probably going to bump into someone she knew. She sighed lightly and opened her eyes. Her family had wandered off, trying to find their school supplies. That was the worst thing about being the oldest, your parents always assumed you were going to be alright by herself. She took a look around and saw the ice cream parlor up ahead. Ashleigh was in the mood for a frozen treat and it was sure warm enough for it. She glanced down at her attire and giggled, she was only wearing a thin tank top and a short chocolate brown skirt. She giggled a little bit more and began walking in the direction of the Ice Cream parlor.

When she arrived she paused at the door. She peered in the window to see who was in there. She saw no one there that she knew and she smiled, she really wasn't in the mood to have to deal with insults. She popped the door open and skipped inside her smile growing. She felt like an 11 year old again, a feeling she liked a lot. She saw the line and groaned, she was lucky she was a girl of patience. The line looked like it could go on forever. She crossed her thin arms and shivered. It was freezing in there but maybe that was just her. She was in very thin clothes. She glanced at the selection and she decided on a simple treat, a cotton candy. It was always her favorite. It was a muggle treat that she always loved. She sighed and waited for her turn to order.

She waited patiently for about 5 minutes for her turn. When she got to the counter she said in her usual light voice "A small cotton candy please." the counter boy nodded and went off to get it. She took that small time to allow her thoughts to wander. She wasn't looking forward to this school year at all. She knew nothing would change, she would be the butt of everyones jokes again and there was nothing she could do to stop it. She hated being made fun of because she's smart. It wasn't her fault they were simply dumb. She smiled lightly at that thought and her eyes fluttered shut. People may make fun of her but she had herself and her friends, that was all that mattered. Shortly after that thought her ice cream came. She grabbed it quickly and set off to find a table.

She found one towards the middle and she sat down. She took her spoon and dipped it in the ice cream. She put it in her mouth and allowed herself to savor the sugary flavor of the ice cream. She sighed and opened her eyes. She crossed her legs and glanced out the window. She saw a group of friends walk by and she felt a pang of jealousy shoot through her. Why couldn't she have that? It wasn't fair but hey life wasn't fair was it? She smiled and continued eating her ice cream, wishing that someone would sit with her.

So her father died, which caused her and her mother to get closer. Okay. But then Mom remarried to some evil guy. How did his beatings of her and the treatement she recieved at home affect her personality? In reality, she wont be all happy and trusting the way you make her. Consider her history (what she has gone through) and then consider her personality and think of it makes sense. Also, it says that she left her family and only talked to her best friends. Where did she go? What happened? Why? I assume when you say she left her family you mean also her cousins, but you dont mention who she is with now. Is she on her own?

[ursula]

First Name:

Ursula

Last Name:

Espinoza Moreno

Age:

Sixteen

Appearance:

History:

Life can be pretty rough when you’re the only girl in a family that is made up of guy, especially when you’re an army brat. All of her uncles had boys, and her grandparent’s lineage had only sons. Many relatives said that it was a blessing for Ursula to be born before her little brother Santiago; however some said it was a bad omen for her even to be born.

Ursula was born and grew up, for the most part, in Barcelona, Spain. Her father Manuel Espinoza was part of the Spanish Armed forces, her mother on the other hand was a teacher at a muggle school. For the majority of her childhood Ursula and her family moved all over Spain, Italy and France. She lost count of how many schools she went to at the age of ten.

Unlike her little brother Santiago, who wasn’t really bothered by the constant moving, Ursula often found it hard to restart her life in her new homes. Leaving everything behind was the worst part of the deal. She never saw any real reason to get attached to people because they never stayed in one place for more than a year. This was probably the reason why Ursula started using nicknames for people, so she wouldn’t feel so close to them. She would make friends, but once her family moved away Ursula lost all contact with them.

Manuel found it rather difficult to keep uprooting his family, especially when he got promoted to General. After noticing how the constant moving was putting strains on his marriage and family life, Manuel decided to retire after 20 years in the military. He recently accepted the position of Commandant at a military academy in France. Instead of attending the academy Ursula accepted her invitation to Beauxbaton’s hoping for a more stable environment.

Personality:

Ursula is very open as well as out going. She is very kind to people she just meets, but finds it kind of difficult to keep up friendships. Ursula isn’t always open about her problems, but when she is she gets a little aggressive. She is quite clever for her age and has developed a strange sense of humor. Ursula was one of those kids who learned to hide her real feelings behind sick jokes, and a tough exterior.

She has a habit of giving people she knows nicknames. They can be based off of anything that pops into her head at any given moment. Ursula says that she only calls the people really important to her by their real name.

Sample RP:

The look on Ursula’s face was less than thrilled. Something just really aggravated her this morning. The morning wasn’t her favorite time of day, but it just got worse and worse. She broke the comb as she brushed it through the long strands of her dark colored hair. Santiago ran past her as she was drinking her morning tea, and spilled it all over her clothes. After that she had to go back upstairs, take another shower, only to find that Santiago used the last bit of the hot water.

A loud scream shook the foundation of the house followed by the thunder of foot steps. “SANTIAGO!” Ursula yelled holding her bath robe closed tightly. “You little brat, why did you use all of the hot water?” water dripped all over the floor as her little brother snickered at her appearance. “You look like a wet cat.” The boy laughed hysterically, as his sister got closer. Ursula grabbed the sides of is face pulling them to the sides, “Who looks funny? You little cactus alien?” she said as the two fought like little kids.

Suddenly the two heard their mother call out to them from upstairs, “What’s going on down their? Are you two fighting again?” Right now these two siblings were contorted into s strange position. Santiago’s and Ursula’s fingers were pulling on the corners of each other’s mouth. Together they let out a muffled “No.” As they listened for their mother’s foot steps to travel back into her room, the Siblings slowly leaned to the side so much that they both ended up on the floor. Now the both of them were soaked, and their fight was going no where. The two of them started to laugh at each other and that was the end of that.

Interesting. An army brat in a vampire family? How did that work out for your father in the army? Explain briefly, because that makes me question it. Show me you thought that part through enough. Also, in her personality, you put that she has trouble making friends. Odd since she goes to many schools. Is there some reason why? Most kids that travel from place to place like that are very good at making friends, usually, though this isn't always true. Did by chance something happen to make her a bit hesitant in making friends, despite the fact that you gave her a good sense of humor?

Alright I worked on it

So wait your not a vampire at all now? It sounds more like you're a muggle-born. If so, you should change your profile.
I did

Must be Rouerie

[jonas]

First Name: Jonas

Last Name: Hillwood (registration wouldn’t let me put that in my username?)

Age: 17

Appearance:

History:
Terri-Lea McFerson attended Beauxbatons Academy, where she meet John Hillwood of Hogwarts 20 years ago on an interschool challenge. They fell in love at first sight and kept in touch by Owl’s for the rest of their school year. From there it moved onto them dating and getting married, both deciding for a change of scenery as they moved to the other side of the world, Australia. Jonas was born on the 11th October 1991, he was just like any other child, only his parents used magic. He surfed in his free-time a great way for him to unwind from his school work. But what he enjoyed most was his arts. Studying several classes of Photography, Design and Contemporary Art through highschool. But with his school years ending, he wanted a change… and asked his parents to send him to Beauxbatons Academy to complete his education.

Personality:
Jonas lives life in the fast lane, he’s the kind of guy that wants to see and do it all. Some times he can be a little to ambiguous in his life’s direction. But he doesn’t care. Nothing really bothers him, which a lot of people find strange. He will have an argument with a friend but he’s over it in no time, many people don’t understand him because of that. But Jonas simply believes that life is too short to hold a grudge. Keeping up with him can be hard at times, moving from one extreme to another, he will let anyone get close to him, and sometimes he gets hurt because of it, yet he never learns.

Sample RP:
The plane touched down and the passengers were let off. Jonas left the small cramped plane and headed for the luggage carousel. It felt like days since he had been on solid ground, and to tell the truth. Jonas had no idea what day it actually was until he checked one of the various screens in the airport. It was Thursday morning. Right… he thought to himself. I left Australia Wednesday morning and I’ve been on a plane for 48 hours and its only Thursday… freakin weird time zones he thought as he waited for his bags to come around, a black duffle bag turned the corner on the carousel and he leaned forwards to take it. They contained the bare minimum supplies, a few clothes, pictures and personal items, everything else he still had to buy before he made it to the school.

Making his way out of the airport, Jonas looked around and smiled. He was on his own, for the first time in his life and he loved it as he headed off down the street, with a messenger bag slung over his shoulder and his duffle bag hanging over the other one, he slid his hand inside the messenger bag and took a hold of his wand, keeping it inside the bag, he had hardly ever used it. Custom made by one of his fathers old school friends. Jonas looked around and waited for a Taxi to pick him up. A small smile resting on his face.


Must be Cossu

[magicalsparkle]

First Name:Jenny

Last Name: Rowle

Age: 13

Appearance:

History:

Jenny was a sickly child at birth. Her mother kept worrying about her condition but it was her father that worried more. He wanted a child to spend some time with and someone to appreciate everything that he and her mother might give. It was a few weeks after Jenny was born when she started getting better. Her mother, proud of her daughter, announced it to her husband who was busy with a report for the Minister of Magic.

It was when Jenny was 5 years old that her dad was transferred to work in the Ministry of Magic in France so they had to move. Since they were in the first class families, meaning they were one of the wealthiest, they chose a mansion with a large backyard, fit for raising a child, especially if it was energetic.

Her mom made a few friends in France while Jenny learned the French tongue with some children for her to understand French people. She also had surprised her father by copying his report to the minister and turning it into French.

Jenny was bitten by a vampire when she was asleep in her bedroom. It had snuck into her open window and bitten her before she even woke up. When Jenny woke up at dawn, she saw that her canines were larger yesterday. She shrieked, causing her parents to rush to her. They were horrified of what had happened and every night when Jenny was hungry, her parents supplied her with an animal’s blood that they had killed for a feast.

She was in her bed when an owl carried a letter for her from Beauxbatons and saying that she was accepted. She immediately told her parents about it.

Personality:

Jenny’s an energetic girl. Se loves to play sports and tease her parents playfully and when she realizes she finally pulled a string, she immediately asks forgiveness and being the only child, she was forgiven instantly by a laughing father and a proud mother. She hates being singled out and she’s rarely seen with her fangs out. When she’s mad, she shows her anger on a tree stump or her stuff toys by throwing them.

She hates liars and those who deceive by giving them a slap across the face and simply turning around to mind her own business. She doesn’t give anyone a smile when her fangs are out for she was to be blamed if she devoured a fellow human, except that she wasn’t human.

Sample RP:

Jenny sat on her bed, sulking about. She was fuming and getting hungry. ”Too bad. He’s not here so you could show him your true self.” she mocked herself. She was mad at Miles Fiskjuh for standing her up like that. He had promised her to meet him under the large Acacia tree in her backyard but no, he went out with his dumb friends.

”I’ll show him.” she muttered. Miles was a vampire, like her but he thought of her as a mortal, the life he had gladly left behind to be a vampire. She stood up and walked to the window, her short blond hair moving with the wind. It was May and it was summer. She could’ve devoured a horse. ”I haven’t thought of that before!” she thought. She grabbed her jacket and she pulled on some shoes and left her room and the mansion.

You should be careful with your sentence structure. Sometimes it just runs on, also in your personality it can be a bit confusing. So just look out for this.

Otherwise . . It must be Sournois.