Sorting (Term Eight)

[mme. o. maxime]

To get sorted you must put on the blue cloak, pictured below, and it will read your mind to see what kind of person you are and to see what house you belong in. The cloak once belonged to Adora Rouerie, one of the original founders. She is the one in the picture below.

Sorting Cloak



Three houses' threads entwined
Within my cloth of blue
One thousand years of history
Have led us down to you
Which house do you belong in?
Rouerie, Cossu, or Sournois
Which will you find your kin within
You're sure to found out soon

Beneath the raven lies
A house of purest blood
The house of Boden Sournois
Takes only those bourgeois
Whom posess the parfait sang
It breeds those of arrogant mind
And those of blackest heart
Are sure to find their kind

Those who choose to join
the house of blue and green
The place for those of a mind keen,
Those students of Adora Rouerie.
A peacock is the house bird
And tradition is the word.
Most who make their home
Are clever, kind and shy
They are often found soaking up a tome.

Last of all, is the house
of those with creative thoughts
Whether be music, art, or poetry
Creativity is to be wrought
Of those who are chosen
for the home of Jocelin Cossu
With colors of the purest white and bluer than the sky
Cossu may be the one to pick
For your imaginative eye

These houses, three
Noble, each, it's sure
Whether you're clever, creative, or pure
We have a home for thee
Amongst the hallowed halls
Of Beauxbatons Academy

--Sorting Cloak Song by Bella Fiore

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To be sorted I want you to fill out the code below. Also please don't go copy the traits directly from the history. Just write truthfully about your character.[/b][/size]

[b]First Name:[/b]
[b]Last Name:[/b]
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]Appearance:[/b]
[b]History:[/b]
[b]Personality:[/b]
[b]Sample RP:[/b]

*I need a paragraph for History and Personality, no exceptions. You can either write a paragraph or post a pic for the appearance of your character. For the sample RP, we don't need an insanely long RP(but a couple paragraphs would be nice), just one that shows your ability, it MUST be one with the character you are signing-up with, not from another site, thanks. As for age, no student can be over the age of 18.

[brieanna]

First Name: Brieanna
Last Name: Karece
Age: 17
Appearance:


History:
Growing up for Brieanna was not quite what many would expect out of a mid class family of six. In her childhood years, Brieanna was expected to be the good one of the family instead, she out to be a rebellious child. Even if she was the first and only girl born to the Karece family, She wasn't always given everything she wanted, if she wanted something she had to earn it. She was a bright child and filled with loads of energy. Every now and then, she would find trouble and get into it just to spite her parents wants and desires for her. At the age of eleven she began to discover her magical powers and only used them when deemed necessary. Brieanna's parents weren't sure if they wanted to send her to a muggle school because they were afraid that she would become worse than what she was, so she was taught at home up until she recieved her letter at Beauxbatons. Still skeptical, they realized that Brieanna needed to go to a school where other kids were and maybe things would change. Brieanna was quite estatic that she was finally able to go to a normal school where other kids her age went. She spent the last few years trying to adjust to where she was and have found herself in heaps of trouble every now and then.


Personality:
Growing up in a standard mid class wizarding family, she was brought up to walk, talk, and dress like a lady. However, she didn't want to be something that her parents wanted her to be, she wanted to be her own person and dress, act and talk the way she wanted to. Brieanna is a social butterfly and likes to talk about a variety of things, but when in a bad mood, she isolates herself from everyone. She is an observer nonetheless, she views the world for how it is and thinks that it could be better but knows it won't ever be better.

Brieanna has the 'I don't care' attitude because her parent's want her to be a miss goody two shoes. She's quick to make friend, just doesn't know anyone who truly understands her. When in situations, she stands back and thinks about things before trying to resolve them. But with split second situations, she acts on instinct. Her parents are not very proud of the way Brieanna was raised. However, she does have a wild side to her and can be fun loving and out going.

Sample RP:
Twilight was definitely the most striking time of the day. The sun going down under the horizon, painted the sky multicolored. For Brieanna, laying there in the grass with her bare feet soaking in the border of the lake was pure heaven. The warmth of the sun making her skin tingles. It was Saturday and with all her homework done she thought it would be a nice idea to spend some time relaxing on the lawns of the school. Instead of her usual attire today she was dressed in bermuda jean shorts, a faded red Rancid t-shirt, and flats. Her dark strands of hair were strewn around her head on the well mowed lawn.

Her eyes were closed and she could feel the last rays of sunlight on the back of her eyelids and exposed arms and legs. She could lay out here in the sun the whole day and she wouldn’t have to worry about her pale complexion getting a sun burn. To keep herself company, Brieanna sang the words to Little Lover’s so Polite by Silversun Pickups in her head. These were the times when she missed her ipod the most. That was the downer side to Beauxbatons; muggle technology didn’t function here, at least that's what she thought and wasn't told otherwise. The only sound around her was the low chatting of other students out on the grounds


You were particularly hard to sort, but...

Must be Rouerie

[heartsandskulls]

First Name:Alexis
Last Name: Sanderson
Age: 16
Appearance:
Alexis stands at 5"6 and 100 pounds. She has long bleach blond hair that lays over her chest. She has fair pale skin. Her eyes are a dark rich chocolate brown.

History: Lexi was born on December 26. Her parents, Cecil and Layla Sanderson thought of her has a gift from god. She had a normal life as a muggle, school, friends,and love ones; but her normal life came tumbling down one night when she was eight. She was waiting for her parents to come pick her up at her Aunt Krissy, but they never did. She found out the next day they where in a car crash and they both died. She was really sad and didn't know what to think. Her aunt asked her what she wanted to do. She decide to change her life and go to an orphanage the farthest one from here, and that was about two hundred miles.

She grew up there with her bestest mate Misty. When she got her letter to go to Beauxbatons they both were sad that they had to split apart. They have been best friends and sister like since her first day their. But the nuns thought it would be a good idea for her to go be with what they called, "her own kind or people."

Personality: Lexi is a well rounded kid. She is the one that knows when to shut up and speak. she is the one that likes to hide close to a fire place and get stuck in a book and keep up with her studies. She also likes to have some fun, but nothing that gets her into a lot of trouble. Alexis loves drawing, though she may not be the best but she loves to just doodle down little ideas and other things. The one thing know one can ever get her to do is sing; the reason why is her mum use to but after that day know one ever heard her sing not even at school or church.

When she actually did something that got her into trouble she always got away with it by giving her little puppy dog eyes and sweet toothy grin. She loved it and learned it from Misty. Lexi also likes the simpliest of things like hearts, stars and ribbons.

Sample RP:

Lexi ran outside two see if her bestest mate wrote her back. She shield her face with her hand and looked up looking for Layla. She saw a tiny dot coming closer and closer, it had to be Layla. Her heart jump it had to be a letter from Misty, her basically sister from the orphanage. Lexi jumped up and down and reached her hand out towards her. It has been months since she last heard of her. They weren't a loud to past note like before so they had to send owls, sharing hers.

The note simply said how things were and how she was. Nothing bad but nothing good. But....one thing was fantastic..Misty wasn't a Girdle she was a Miss Misty Silverton. This made her smile, she thought she really needed it. But she knew she was never a loud to talk to her because she could not blurt out that she was a witch. Lexi took Layla to the owlery and sat there with the letter in hand and tears out to run down her face.

Must be Rouerie

[saiyuo12]

b]First Name:Kimmi
Last Name:Summers
Age:16
Appearance:Sky blue eyes with dark black hair
History: I was born on October 30, I was raised in America and i just moved here just recently. But transfered to Beauxbaton's Academy from my old school called magic school school just shortly after the move here, My dad taught charms and my mother taught potions. That's were she gets her talents from for charms and potions but one day her mother got a job in magic of ministry in France so they had to move. She has two older brothers and one older sister that work's with the magic ministry and a younger sister whose going to attained the same school as Kimmi
Personality: She has a way to charm a boy to fall for her by them staring into her sky blue eyes that almost enchants them to fall for her but shes really shy and caring, she loves to go on a whole lot of adventures with her friends and family. She really quite and really active when it comes to sports or playing with her brothers or sisters, she's really a person to rely on when you need her the most she doesn't like when people tease her friends or lie to her.
Sample RP:
One day Kimmi was playing an active game with her best friend Rose and all of a sudden her older brother Wyatt came and took the soccer ball from them and started running with it. Wyatt give me my ball back now I'm not playing with you. Yells Kimmi while chasing him around the field. You'll have to catch me first sis. Says Wyatt while throwing the too Chris and Chris caught it and started running in a different direction. Ha,ha this is so funny! Yells rose while laughing and falling to the ground at the same time. Enough you two! Yells Kimmi while muttering a spell and transforming the ball into a snake. Ah, snake! Yells Chris while putting the snake and running to wards Rose and putting her in the front of him. Honestly Chris it's just a garden snake and it won't even harm you. Says rose while picking it up and petting it and then transforming it back into a soccer ball.
Ha,Ha, Chris is afraid of a garden snake! Says Wyatt and Kimmi while laughing at him with tears in their eyes.

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There are only three magic schools: Hogwarts, Beauxbatons, and Durmstrang. None that are called "Magic School." Also, you need to add more to your personality. Does she have flaws? And be careful of her ability to "charm" boys, because that can be godmodding. Also, work on your RP. Use quotations, etc. You also need to change your display name of your account to match your application. Oh, and if you're not going to include a picture in the appearance, you need to write at least a pargraph.

[azkaye]

First Name:Lilly
Last Name:Maraya
Age:16
Appearance:White//blond hair. Blue//gray eyes. Tanned skin. Thin . Lilly's hair is ringlettes, unless she has straightned which she does regularly. She the average height for a girl of her age.
History:Lilly was born on January 17th 1991. She had a rough childhood, not one that many would want to grow up in. She was born in one of those broken down towns in America. Lilly lived with her two sisters, her mother and her farther. One night after returning from school, Lilly walked into her bedroom to see her mother, farther and one sister dead on the beds, having been brutally shot to death. Her other sister had fled, having killed them!

Lilly was taken to an orphanage in England, where she spent most of her childhood years. Then, she was Adopted by a witch and a wizard, they sent her to hogwarts, but she didnt fit in. So the second choice was beauxbatons!

Her mother was elven, and her farther was a wizard.

Personality:Lilly is a Active, artistic fun and happy person. She loves nature...as she is of elven descent. She loves to hang with friends...even if it is after dark! She loves to break the rules, and have fun doing it! Lilly isnt what you could really call a...subtle humman being. She's loud and proud of it. Shes also a very indipendadnt girl, and its her way or the high way! ok so she has an attitude...who doesnt??
Sample RP: Lilly opened the door to her bedroom and saw her mother, father and one
of her sisters dead. She watched in horror as their blood spilt onto the carpet. At that point, she was the agiest she ahd ever been. The pain and the anger inside her that she felt at that moment...was so strong she could feel herself heating up. She had to vent somehow, so she punched a wall. Busting her fist open, blood went everywhere...she didnt care...at this moment anything could happen to her and she wouldnt care.Lilly covered her eyes and sank to the floor screaming. Tears streeming out of her eyes, she made a vow to get her sister back for killing her familly.

This was really confusing. Which parent was elven, and which was a witch? Her biological parents, of course, because she cannot go to magical school unless she's part witch somehow. Also, you need to write a pargraph for the appearance if you aren't going to include a picture. Please expand on the personality and work on your RP sample.

Must be Sournois

[musicmeltdownx3]

First Name: Kristy

Last Name: Vander

Age: 13

Appearance:

History: Kristy was born in Godric's Hallow. She has a brother named Brian (named after dad), has a sister named Kerry. And an younger brother named Kevin. Her mom is named Emily. And her dads name is Brain. When Kristy was 9 Brian (dad) became the keeper for the Chudley Cannons. But after two years her retired and became a Journalist for the Quibbler. Kristy mom became an Auror. When Kristy turned 11 her older sister Kerry got a job at Diaogn Alley. And her brother Brian went to Romania.


A few months after Kristy 11th birthday her older brother Brian had went to Romania to work with dragons. Kevin goes to Durmstrang Academy, but Kristy and Kevin always goes home for Christmas. Kristy has a few friends at Durmstrang, because some of Kevin's friends come over there house.

So far Kristy has started school. And Kerry has been practicing quidditch with her mom a lot, and so has Kristy. Kristy wants to be the Keeper for the HolyHead Harpies. Brain Jr. who is now about 26 works with dragons but is an Auror in his free time. And still with all this going on Kristy is doing great in school.

And Kristy's dad, Brian is now a journalist for the Quibbler has been writing a lot and helping Brian Jr. with his dragon business. Everything seemed to be fine until two weeks before Kristy had started school. One of Kristy's Uncle had died in one of those Spell-Gone-Wrong situation.

Personality: Kristy is the kind of girl who loves Quidditch. She loves Charms class, D.A.D.A. and enjoys school. Kristy is very creative and a Joker. She loves to laugh, and she teases. When she dresses, she looks like a muggle because she likes there kind odd clothes. She acts a lot different when she at home or around muggle then when she is in the wizarding world. She’s very smart. She’s not shy and will speak if something bothering her or what’s on her mind.

Kristy has a few muggle friends at home, but of course, they don’t know she’s a witch. At home when’s she’s not doing chores she either play her guitar to try and write a new song, or she skateboards. When is comes to Quidditch Kristy is great her broom. She does really good at keeping, her sister is good at chasing, Brian is good at beating, and Kevin is a great seeker. Kristy’s mom is also great at keeping to.

Kristy also has a few flaws too. Kristy has a bad habit of biting her nails ands muttering curses under her breath. She also talks back and can hold a grudge for a very long time. Every time she around her sister she’s always clumsy. But the worst thing about Kristy is that she has a big temper. She is also very emotional.

Sample RP: Kristy was walking to the lake, her wand, and a book in hand. When Kristy reached the lake she sat down at the edge of the lake and started to hum. She took out her book, Defense For The Defenseless and started to read. She skipped a few chapters until she found an old piece of parchment she used as a bookmark. A few minutes of reading and she decided to practice some charms for charms class. Kristy put the piece of parchment back in her book and picked up her wand.


Kristy was thinking of a spell to do, and then she thought of one. Kristy raised her wand, pointed it at the book and said clearly; "Accio Book!". The book zoomed put her hand which forced her wand out of her hands. She picked up her wand again and thought of another spell. A few seconds later Kristy raised her wand and said "Avis" and birds flew out of her wand. Kristy was really happy today but she didn’t know why......

Done!

Must be Cossu

[mikauchida]

First Name:
Mika
Last Name:
Uchida
Age:
15
Appearance:


History:
Being born in a big family wasn’t necessarily a bad thing. At least Mika had never thought that it was a bad thing to have lots of sisters and brothers, even though they didn’t get much presents for their birthday nor for Christmas. That wasn’t important to her but that they were close and that their family was very warm and understanding.

1st January. Cold winter morning, yet still it looked very bright outside. Sparkling white snow were covering the grounds and sun was shining, making the day bit more warmer than normally. That day Mika Uchida was born. Her mother Aiko and father Shinji were the first in the family to meet the small baby girl, though the very next day her two older sisters and one older brother got to see her too.

For her parents’ surprise, Mika learned to walk and talk quite early. They thought that she would become really serious child, but instead she loved playing with her sisters and brother more than anything. It was very rare to see her cry, and she didn’t even become angry that easily.

When Mika turned two, Aiko got pregnant again and she got two new younger brothers. When she saw them first time, she started to smile really widely and just wanted to hold them, but because she was still so small and her parents wanted to be carefully, she was only able to touch them.

A few years passed and Mika was more around her twin brothers than with her older sisters and brother. She even became bit boyish, but still she got lots of girl instincts in her. She was also bit motherly type and she took care of the two wild boys who seemed to get into trouble easily every now and then. Luckily, Mika was there for them most of the times and helped them out.

Mika was celebrating her 11th birthday when she got a letter from a wizardry and witchcraft school. It wasn’t really surprise for her family, because her mother was witch after all, even though her father was a muggle. Her older sisters and brother hadn’t gotten any magical abilities so Mika was the first child in the family. (All of them were quite sure though, that the twins would also have magical abilities.) The only thing that was a surprise for them was to find out that Mika was actually a metamorphmagi. Aiko’s grand grandmother had been one too, but Aiko wasn’t which why they had thought that none of their children would be either. For some reason they had never noticed it before until they got the letter where it was also said. That’s why Aiko started to practise to change her appearance at will.

Four years passed calmly while Mika had improved and become a great witch. She had always said that she wanted to go abroad which why her parents started to find out about different magical schools and finally found out about Beauxbatons. They decided that it would be a perfect place for their daughter and suggested the place for her too. That’s why she decided that she would go to study there, and if everything would go well her twin brothers would also come there. But for now, Mika would confront Beauxbatons all by herself.

Personality:
Mika is quiet person, but not shy one. She actually gets along pretty much anyone and she also loves to help others. She’s very good at listening others, but she doesn’t often talk about herself and about her problems. She doesn’t want to worry others with her own problems, but if others got worries, she will be more than glad to help them.

Mika is also very intelligent and she likes to read quite a lot. Her favourite subject is potions actually. Usually in class, Mika isn’t the one who raises her hand right away if professor asks something, even though she would know the answer. Only if no one else answers, then she just might answer into it, but there’s a rare chance to that too. It’s not because she would be too shy, but she just likes to hear others opinions first, before giving in her own one. She often is the last one to speak and tell her opinion if she’s in a group and they are discussing about something. She thinks that this is the best way to get what she wants.

Believe it or not, Mika loves singing and acting. She’s also great at playing different instruments. She loves to sing in karaoke bars, but also hopes that she would one day be able to join in a band. When she gets on stage, she’s like a different person.

Mika is an airhead. If she suddenly starts to concentrate into something, she can't hear nor see anyone else around her. She just concentrates on that one thing. She's also a dreamer which why she often needs to study some extra, because she just suddenly might start to dream about something in the middle of a lesson.

She's also very sensitive at times and hot tempered. She gets offended really easily and if you say something bad about her (or her family), she might get sad or angry. She knows this though and tries her best not to get too angry, but there's times when she really just can't help it at all.

Sample RP:

After being in a few metros, changed airplane twice and travelling in a train, Mika finally got in to Paris. She sighed in relief when she got out of the train and quietly just looked around while standing in the platform. People rushed past of her when she just calmly checked her watch before slowly starting to walk away from the train station. Even though the school break had just started, Mika had still decided to leave in Beauxbatons already and spent the break there, because now she had a great opportunity to calmly explore the school without having to rush from class to class.

When the young Japanese girl finally got outside of the station, she tried to get a taxi. She took a book called ‘Basic France Phrases’ and started to scan it quietly. Lots of taxis flashed by her while she just stood there and tried to find the right words. Soon she turned to look at the coming taxi and waved her hand little bit.

”Taxi, s'il vous plait!”

Her accent was perfect, because she had been practising it quite a lot back at home. She didn’t want to seem like a total idiot, because thieves usually noticed those people very well and then took advantage of it. Luckily, anyone didn’t seem to pay attention to her, except the taxi because it had stopped in front of her. Quickly an older man stepped out from it and took her trunk and putted it in the back of the car. He had also opened the door for her so that she could sit down in the taxi.

”Parlez-vous anglais?”

She decided to ask if the driver could speak english. At least she was better at that. Lucky for her, the taxi driver nodded while smiling, though he didn’t reply to her at all which made her wonder if he really understood english. Well, at least she didn’t have to start to speak about weather or some other small talk subject, and could just concentrate to the view of Paris.

After saying where she wanted to go, the man right away started to drive while Mika quietly kept staring out of the window. She really started to hope that she would have taken her camera with her, but unfortunately she had forgotten to put it in her trunk. But maybe it wasn’t that necessarily; she got a photographic memory which why she remembered everything she saw. That’s why she also couldn’t wait to see Beauxbatons and get some new unforgettable memories.

Good, but could you please name some flaws she has?

Mika: Done :] Any better?

Must be Rouerie

[nepdog290]

First Name: Elliana
Last Name: Nerusso
Age: 13
Appearance:
History: Elliana September Nerusso was born on September 20, 1994. Her parents, Jiana Russo-Nerusso and Samme Nerusso, thought that she was the quietest one of 7 children. Sort of an outcast, they called her. Her best friend was a Veela, Erinina McElroy was an outcast from her family. She was sneaking into Elliana's village, when the guards found her. She was put in the prison, where Elliana had been visiting the prisoners. Noone was allowed in the prison, so when the guards came, she hid. They befriended each other in the prison, a hidden friendship just between Elliana and Erinina.
Personality: Quiet and shy: She never cried as a baby, shy and as meek as a lamb. She was the most trusted in her school, known to never tell a lie or gossip. Hunter: The best hunter out of her 6 other siblings. Dancer: danced in the several parties they had. She dances mysteriously with each movement watched with awe.
Sample RP: I had run away from my family with my friend, Erinina. She had told me of this wizarding school. She knew of this school because of her older brother who was running away with us. We had to pack at her house, where we found that Erinina and her brother had hatched a dragon. Three letters were attached to the dragon since birth. And Erinina and her brother knew that they had to have one other. One elven-and-wizard blood. I, Erinina, and her brother had been accepted to Beauxbatons. We rode the fully-grown dragon to this "so called wizarding school" and I waited for my destiny to come.

Add more to her personality. Also, dragons? Newly hatched dragons cannot fly. Besides, Beauxbatons has winged horses, not dragons.

[billie]

First Name: Billie

Last Name: O’Rourke

Age: 16

Appearance: Billie has silky black hair that falls down well past her shoulders and is normally up in a simple ponytail. She has bright blue eyes that are always rimmed with black eyeliner and she always wears bright red lipstick that contrasts nicely with her pale complexion. She is 5”4 and around a size 14 (Australian) and when she isn’t in her school uniform she is always seen in a pair of dark blue jeans and a band shirt. She has a small eyebrow ring in her right eyebrow that was a present from one of her muggle friends for her 16th birthday.

History: Billie has grown up in France but was born in Australia to her two Australian parents. The O’Rourke family moved to France when Billie was only four years old and she barely remembers anything about her home country. She is a half blood witch since her mother was muggle-born and her father was pureblood. Billie started Beauxbatons in her first year when she received her letter and has been going there ever since.

Personality: Billie is a cheerful person who always speaks her mind, even if she shouldn’t. She is constantly talking to the people around her, which tends to get her into trouble with the teachers and sometimes other students, and isn’t afraid to interrupt the class for a quick joke or to voice her opinion on something. She is a bit of a bookworm and is also heavily into music to the point where she will randomly burst into song, usually one of the muggle songs she learnt over the holidays. Her parents are big workaholics who have impacted greatly on Billie making her less inclined to do her work rather than clown around the school. Her parents work habits also largely effected her personality by making her highly independent.

Sample RP: Billie O’Rourke practically skipped down the halls of Beauxbatons on her way to her first class of the day humming to herself as she went. It was just after the Christmas holidays and Billie had gained a bunch of new CD’s for Christmas including a Disturbed album.

“Shout, shout, let it all out, these are things I could do without” she muttered cheerfully ignoring the strange looks she was getting from a bunch of third years she passed, “So come on, I’m talking to you so come on”

Billie didn’t think she was a bad singer so she continued to ignore everyone until she finally got to her class and walked in, greeting the teacher cheerfully and taking a seat in the middle of the class next to a friend of her.

Billie could never be told she was a bad person because she didn’t have a bad bone in her body. She was rarely unhappy and always bouncing off the walls and singing around the school.

Must be Cossu

[elliananerusso]

First Name: Elliana
Last Name: Nerusso
Age: 13
Appearance:
History: Elliana September Nerusso was born on September 20, 1994. Her parents, Jiana Russo-Nerusso and Samme Nerusso, thought that she was the quietest one of 7 children. Sort of an outcast, they called her. Her best friend was a Veela, Erinina McElroy was an outcast from her family. She was sneaking into Elliana's village, when the guards found her. She was put in the prison, where Elliana had been visiting the prisoners. Noone was allowed in the prison, so when the guards came, she hid. They befriended each other in the prison, a hidden friendship just between Elliana and Erinina.
Personality: Elliana had many friends because she was so flexible with her attitude with others. She went along with everything they said, making her seem shy. Her teachers thought of her as a good student, but always shy. She had learned to dance, sing, play the piano and the flute, play quidditch, and fly a hippogriff. She knew that the training of flying a winged animal would help her fly the winged horse her grandmother owned. She was able to fly the winged horse, but she was too meek to ask. After all, she already had a hippogriff. She knew that she would do well in a wizarding school, with her creativeness and intellegience. She had been born to Elven-Pure Blood. She had been the smartest in her school and the most creative. She had painted the ceilings of the school with the carriage and the flying horses of Beauxbatons Academy. She knew of these winged horses from her dreams. She also had the gift of the sixth sense. She would predict everything, and they would all happen. She was gifted marvelously, but was shy.
Sample RP: I had run away from my family with my friend, Erinina. She had told me of this wizarding school. She knew of this school because of her older brother who was running away with us. We had to pack at her house, where we found that Erinina and her brother had raised a flying horse. Three letters were attached to the horse since birth. And Erinina and her brother knew that they had to have one other. One elven-and-wizard blood. I, Erinina, and her brother had been accepted to Beauxbatons. We rode the flying dragon to this "so called wizarding school" and I waited for my destiny to come.

This is confusing. There is two Ellianas? You need to give her more flaws, she is too much like a Mary Sue. Was she considered most creative at a muggle school she went to? Assuming she would be considered most creative here is like godmodding, and I can't allow it. Please make her seem less like a Mary Sue. Also, if she is of Seerer blood, you need to give her weakesness. She cant be perfect. Oh, and change the display name to fit the name given in the application.

[musiccrazychica]

First Name: Arianne
Last Name: Phillips
Age: 16
Appearance:

History: Her parents look nothing like her because Arianne was adopted. She has a little brother and an older brother too but no sisters. She got adopted when she was two years old and doesn't really remeber her real parents very well. Her parents are muggleborn and her brothers don't have a single drop of magic in them. Nobody knows who her real parents are because her fater had left her mother and her mother was very poor and she knew she wouldn't be able to raise her daughter so she gave her to the orphanage with papers or her birth and her name and etc. So she believes she is a muggleborn but she really isn't. Her mother was part veela and her father was a muggleborn.

Personality: Since she has no sisters she isn't very lady like. She plays sports and hasn't worn a dress since she was five. She has tried to wear make up but it felt weird and only used it when her mom forced her too. She loves music. Either playing it, listening to it, or watching it, she loves it. Her mom says that she's obsessed but it's just one of those things she loves. She's a really friendly person and kind of likes to speak her mind. But speakin gher mind got her into trouble a couple of times. She isn't the smartest in the class but isn't the least smartest either. She has many friends of different types. Like she has sporty friends, and smart friends, and so on. She likes to draw occasionally but prefers music over drawing.

Sample RP: She was sitting at home on her bed looking out the window with some headphones in her ears. She glanced at her packed suitcase and sighed looking back. Earlier she had been packing for school which was only a day away. She was feeling nervous for the first time in a long time. She would be leaving her friends and family behind and would ahve to keep a huge secret from all her best friends. She got up and changed the song on her ipod to Clumsy by Fergie. She loved this song the most at the moment and had played it a lot. It always seemed to calm her down.

When the song ended Arianne felt much better. Her mom called her down and Arianne brought her suitcase down too. "Good. I was just going to ask you to bring that down so you wouldn't have to bring that down the stairs in the morning." Arianne's mom said. She walked though the kitchen and out the back door to the backyard. She climbed a tree and sat in one of the branched and pulled a blue notebook out of one of her secret hiding spots and began to draw the sunset.

Add more to the history. What happened with her real parents? Even if the character doesn't know personally, what happened?

Must be Cossu

[eloisewoodland]

Name:Eloise

Last name:Woodland

age:14

Apperance:

History:She was born to a mom,Dad and is full French.Her Dad died from a backfiring spell when she was 5 and Eloise watched it happen, so her mom raised her alone.Her mom is a full veela so Eloise is half veela and half witch.Ever since she was 6 her life was a bit hard because she discovered her magic powers and her veela powers.Her mother had a hard time with this but in the end when Eloise got her letter,her mom knew everything she went threw was worth it.Even though Eloise never knew her dad,she thought about him everyday and how she wished that he could had been there for everything she knows.Her mother calls Eloise her little star shine,because her skin seems to glow.

Eloise would sometimes go into the little village by where she lived and help out.Dispute her Veela charm Eloise trys to act as normal as can be,but its a little hard when she cant really control it.Eloise would sometimes go and read to the young kids and such.

Personality:She is very lady like and helps out when she can.But she can be a bit stuck up and rude sometimes.She is sensitive about things and her emotions sometimes get in the way.She does speak her mind when needed and she has wonderful manners.She is not so good at trusting people,because her mom had always taught her that most people do only harm.But Eloise has a very good Judge of Character and she can see threw lies.She gets nervous easily and can sometimes not say the right things.Her laugh is what people love about her.She can and will ignore people if they upset her or are rude,which is why people say she is rude sometimes.But her big weakness is her Emotions.She is bright and she can play Guitar and sing.

Sample RP:

Eloise Lay in bed trying to write more songs she could sing along with playing her
guitar. She has but only a few notes down when she decided that she needed a
break. So she put down her pen and paper and went down into the kitchen where her
mother was baking and humming softy. Eloise smiled as she passed her mom and went
outside to her favorite spot,the big field of flowers that only swept in the wind.

Eloise sat down in the field and pulled out her dream Journal which she kept hidden in a
small little who,that never got wet or anything. She knew that her mom had placed
enchantments on the land so the journal must be protected by magic. She began to write in it.

Dear Journal,

Once again the dreams just keep coming back. Me sitting in a dark room away from
everything and no way of getting back,i can hear Simone laughing and just when i think
that there is light,i fall to the ground. I have been dreaming this dream for a while.I
wonder if it means anything.Who really knows. Today is also the anniversary of when dad
died. I miss him like crazy and wish that what happened never did.But i guess everything
happens for a reason.

Eloise closed the journal and put it back in her hiding spot. Than she laid on the ground
and just soaked in the warmth of the earth and the smell of the flowers. She laid on the
ground for at least 20 minutes than an idea struck her for a song and she quickly got up and went to find her guitar.

Must be Sournois

[darcy]

First Name:
Edward

Last Name:
Darcy

Age:
16

Appearance:


History:
A well-known Pure-Blood wizard by the name of James Darcy was traveling abroad one summer when he came to stop in a quaint little English town, far from his own home in London. James had been traveling to Scotland when his trip was diverted due to a family members sudden illness. James had taken a side trip to visit the said family member and do all he could to help them. While he was there a beautiful young healer by the name of Alethea Scott had been brought to his acquaintance. She was a beautiful girl, just around his age. The two got to know each other and soon fell deeply in love.

James brought Alethea home with him, back to his parents. Even though they disliked Alethea, they loved their son. An agreement was finally drawn and the two wed. They moved into the large Darcy household and began their family.

James and Alethea were soon blessed with a son, Edward Darcy. Their son was special from the day he was born. He grew up as a quiet and stubborn child possessing Head-Strong qualities that got him into trouble. Two years later the Darcy family welcomed a daughter Arianna. She showed entirely different qualities then her brother and was a soft spoken shy young lady.

Edward and Arianna grew up together, having only themselves and their family as companions. The two formed a close bond and hold it to this day. Edward was home schooled by his mother until he was 16 where his mother and father finally agreed it was time to send him to a school where he could learn proper magic. Edward was sent to Beauxbatons, a place of his own choosing where he desperately hoped to fit in with the other students.

Personality:
Edward comes off in many different ways to many different people. He is always very quiet but not because he has nothing to say. More because he doesn't care to say it. He is often described as a 'proud' man, just like his father. Edward isn't very creative but he has many talents. He can't draw to save his life and plays Piano a little. He is also an exceptional dancer who has stepped on one too many feet for his own liking. When he was growing up he was taught the proper way to do things and still follows his old English ways. Edward is highly intelligent and very witty. This is not necessarily a good thing for him though. His wit is constantly adding to the dislike for him that people have and his intelligence sometimes comes off more as arrogance which it most of the time is. He hardly ever is left speechless but what he has to say isn't always what should be said. It takes alot for him to make friends with someone but once befriended Edward is a very loyal companion. Not many people wish to befriend him because of his intimidating qualities and because of his "not always nice" attitude. Edwards one weakness is his family. He would do anything for his family and that has gotten him into quite a bit of trouble in the past.

Sample RP:
Edward had arrived at the school only hours ago and he already was missing his sister. Poor Arianna. Stuck at home with nothing to do but her lessons. Who would she play with? It wasn't like Mother would take her out. She was too busy helping Father. Edward missed his sister dearly. She was his best friend. But, he needed to be away from her. It was healthy for him. He was at a new school! Edward had never even been to school...

Edward had settled his things into his room and just left everything packed. It was early and he wanted a chance to explore while he still could. He left the dorm, and his jacket back with it, and began to wander down through the castle to get to the grounds. Once outside he silently began to walk the grounds. How odd, they were almost like the grounds back home. But not nearly as well kept.

Edward wandered through the grounds and finally wove his way to the edge of the forest. It was a nice day out and there was plenty of time for the Sun to be up so Edward decided to go and explore the forest. It was such a nice time of the year and the day was great. Not too hot and not too cold.

Edward wandered silently, observing the passing birds and other woodland creatures. He would sometimes stop to see a creature he was unfamiliar with. Edward wandered the path and was soon brought out near what must be the Lake. He walked slowly down to the shore and stood quietly, looking out at the glassy water.

Edited the History and Personality. I made the mistake of letting my sister{{Avid P&P fan}} make the application. Better?

Must be Rouerie

[violettabulstrode]

First Name: Violetta
Last Name: Bulstrode
Age: 13 years old, born on Dec. 15
Appearance: Violetta is a medium sized girl with long, wavy dark brown hair. He hair is usually worn down in a side part, or up in a knot bun. She has long eyelashes and vibrant green eyes which give off a piercing effect. Violetta is known to usually wear sweaters and jeans, almost always quite casual. She never really wears makeup, unless it's required.
History: Violetta grew up in her families estate near Brighton, England. Her childhood was relatively good, and her parents were kind enough. She was the child of Avery Bulstrode and Coriander Wood, both coming from pureblood families. Violetta's mother was a good mother, and loved her child very much. This is why Violetta may have been a bit spoiled.When she was nine, her mother and father decided to move to France, and this is how Violetta came to Beauxbaton's. Coriander nicknamed Violetta, 'Via', so that it was easier to say her name.
Personality: Violetta is very artistic, lovable, and dramatic. However, she can often be over-confident and a bit of a smart-alec too. She loves to have fun, and often acts childish and peppy. Via acts a bit immature sometimes, but is usually a good friend. She has good manners, but often questions the truth and argues about almost anything. Her favorite hobby is sketching scenes from her garden, and she loves to dance.
Sample RP: Violetta Bulstrode stood gazing fixedly at her teacher, a bit nervous. He had caught her sketching a unicorn during class and seemed very furious, for which Via did not know why. "Oh, come on! Who expects me to pay attention to some boring lesson on magical trade and commerce, anyway?" she thought daringly. The professor walked around to the front of her desk, a frown etched in his face, "Miss Bulstrode, what are you doing?!" The professor said with forced calmness. "Y-yes, I was just sketching, a drawing, um..." Via muttered looking down at her sketchbook, embarrassed. The professor walked over to Via's desk, tore the page from the book, and shredded it with his wand in seconds. Then the bell rang, meaning that that certain class had finished. "I'm really quite sorry, really I am, really! I just-" Violetta broke off her plea as her teacher interrupted. He said rather harshly, "Yes, I get the point. You seem to take more care in drawing than listening! 'Owever, I cannot deny that you get very good marks on all of the tests, but please, get on to your next class!" The professor waved Via away without another word, sending her down the hall rather pleased with herself.

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[violettabulstrode]

First Name: Violetta

Last Name: Moon

Age: 13 years old, born on Dec. 15

Appearance: Violetta is a medium sized girl with long, wavy dark brown hair. Her hair is usually worn down in a side part, or up in a knot bun. She has long eyelashes and vibrant green eyes which give off a piercing effect. Violetta is known to usually wear sweaters and jeans, almost always quite casual. She never really wears makeup, unless it's required.

History: Violetta grew up in her families estate near Brighton, England. Her childhood was relatively good, and her parents were kind enough. She was the child of Avery Moon and Coriander Wood, both coming from pureblood families. Violetta's mother was a good mother, and loved her child very much. This is why Violetta may have been a bit spoiled.When she was nine, her mother and father decided to move to France, and this is how Violetta came to Beauxbaton's. Coriander nicknamed Violetta, 'Via', so that it was easier to say her name.

Personality: Violetta is very artistic, lovable, and dramatic. However, she can often be over-confident and a bit of a smart-alec too. She loves to have fun, and often acts childish and peppy. Via acts a bit immature sometimes, but is usually a good friend. She has good manners, but often questions the truth and argues about almost anything. Her favorite hobby is sketching scenes from her garden, and she loves to dance.

Sample RP: Violetta Moon stood gazing fixedly at her teacher, a bit nervous. He had caught her sketching a unicorn during class and seemed very furious, for which Via did not know why. "Oh, come on! Who expects me to pay attention to some boring lesson on magical trade and commerce, anyway?" she thought daringly. The professor walked around to the front of her desk, a frown etched in his face, "Miss Moon, what are you doing?!" The professor said with forced calmness. "Y-yes, I was just sketching, a drawing, um..." Via muttered looking down at her sketchbook, embarrassed. The professor walked over to Via's desk, tore the page from the book, and shredded it with his wand in seconds. Then the bell rang, meaning that that certain class had finished. "I'm really quite sorry, really I am, really! I just-" Violetta broke off her plea as her teacher interrupted. He said rather harshly, "Yes, I get the point. You seem to take more care in drawing than listening! 'Owever, I cannot deny that you get very good marks on all of the tests, but please, get on to your next class!" The professor waved Via away without another word, sending her down the hall rather pleased with herself.

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